npub16uchthmwa5xkurj7yjfkh5tn8j8uz94dul9eu4slguaqchlzfzssjwk62q (npub16uc…k62q) You hooked me on "When the woman she loves dies." I'm a simple girl - I see WLW, I like! 😅
That aside, it's a good blurb! A few things I noticed:
- The introductory paragraph comes across as too vague. Maybe add one or two details to illustrate the differences in their lives?
- The "Their worlds are about to collide..." feels redundant.
- Two uses of "way(s)" in the same phrase makes it sound a bit repetitive.
Anyway, just my two cents! I'm not great at blurbs, I'm afraid 😂
Nioiclín Hidalgo /
npub1g5q…jh62
2023-08-31 21:56:56
in reply to nevent1q…qalw
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npub1g5qunvyslzymw5rwdtkh8eap7w0new4kpaee3gkze09r7y9kcvzqq9jh62Published at
2023-08-31 21:56:56Event JSON
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